A Halloween Trick or Treat

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2 Responses to A Halloween Trick or Treat

  1. Mary Castillo says:

    It still gives me chills!BR/BR/Cheers,BR/Mary

  2. Jeremy Deal says:

    I saw this on Nathan Bransford’s blog, and out of the 200 I’ve read so far, it’s my favorite. Just wanted to let you know.

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